Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion
Many people believe that movies and computer games with violent content have negative repercussions on community and should be prohibited. However , some people assert that they are safe and adhoc people in lighten their mind and mood. This essay discusses both opinions and then I will give my perspective.
First, computer games and films can influence society if they have inhumanity content. Films play a pivotal role in spreading the right message across the society as people assumes that they are real and start following what they see in their life. For example, people try the stunts or fights without safety which results loss of life or injuries. Computer games are mainly played by youngsters and if they see gun-shooting or fights then they start implementing them in their day-to-day life with friends and family. To illustrate, children who watch WWE fights in television and online games use the fighting techniques on their friends. Due to negative ramifications, people want ban on movies and online games which have harmful content.
However, films and video games espouse some people to distract their mind from stress and to ease their mood. They think that content in these sources is non-toxic and just act as a source of entertainment and fun. People feel that movies are unrealistic and cannot influence their behavior and qualities along-with they are paramount to improve their reflexes and thinking capabilities. To illustrate, lot of people go to watch movies on weekends so that they can relax and enjoy some time from monotonous life.
In conclusion, I believe that both sides of arguments have their reasons and beliefs. In my opine, violent content should be banned in movies and online games so that less number of crimes or accidents occur in our society and to send out meaningful message across the communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12871287129 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60718131141 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8003103649 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351392698443 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124641082867 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581957191048 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21760800262 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579572800413 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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