You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.
Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:
say which electrical goods you want
ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay
explain how you will collect the goods.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear...
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about a TP link wireless router model number 4z523, which is the latest model and I saw on your website that it is in stock.
I will be thankful if you inform me the price of this router including all government taxes and delivery charges to Dubai. Also, I will like to know about the payment method. I can either pay through current dated cheque or can transfer money into the bank account. Furthermore, please let me know if the device comes along with rack to fix it in wall and is the device having international or regional warranty? Also, do I need to purchase a separate charger for it or the package includes all accessories.
I will like you to send it through courier to my enclosed home address.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
... and delivery charges to Dubai. Also, I will like to know about the payment method. ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, James.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62416107383 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49680666283 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684563758389 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3708771293 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131359455657 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542714954366 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441439479261 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08652017134 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322572797804 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.