You would like to join the local orchestra. Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice – Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate – Express your enthusiasm for music
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in relation to the advertised position of chief conductor at the local orchestra in Sunday times.
I have done MS music from High school music. Apart from the music education degree, I also have a performance degree from opera music and arts center. In addition, I have hands-on experience of guitar, as I was leading my school's opera. There my main responsibilities center around, to control the ensemble through visible gesture, setting the tempo, shaping the group interpretations and sound, selecting the music for performance. Furthermore, I love to spend my free time, by learning new notes, studying scores and listening to new music as I am very passionate about the music.
I believe, my experience makes me a suitable candidate for this job. please, find my CV attached for your perusal. If you have any further queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview.
regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11042944785 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92230684573 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693251533742 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8381254962 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101617846659 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415749958918 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520680837917 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074271741769 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709343601672 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.