You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear sir or Madam
This is Ebrahim Samarej from Bank Saderat Iran (BSI), I would like to register on The professional bankers’ seminar that you will run in September. I want to take some information directly from you because unfortunately, your website is not very helpful.
As I mentioned above, I work for BSI as a teller but I keen to learn more and more about today’s world banking techniques. So, when the seminar will run exactly? Because I have to get leave from my boss.
Please send me a list of the topics that the specialist will talk about. Because I couldn’t find any details about topics and specialists’ names on your website too.
At the end, how much I have to pay? And how can I pay my registration cost? Please if I must send money to your bank account please send me your bank account number. But I prefer pay the cost online to sending money to your bank account.
With the best regards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day's world banking techniques. So, when the seminar will run exactly? Becau...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...So, when the seminar will run exactly? Because I have to get leave from my boss. Plea...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alists' names on your website too. At the end, how much I have to pay? And ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60479041916 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79185797246 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4224783183 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102609800926 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355091998046 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383763123767 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517222063136 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499464185915 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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