You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Rona Lyn Olivar. I am currently working as an ICU Nurse (Intensive Care Unit) at a tertiary level and this private hospital is called the Urdaneta City Sacred Heart Hospital which is situated in the province of Pangasinan here in the Philippines. I have learned from our ICU Department that your expert team will be conducted an EKG (Electrocardiogram) thorough training in Singapore. I am writing to you today because I would also like to attend and ask for specific information regarding the seminar schedules, about the program, accommodation and the cost.
Firstly, with regards to dates and time, I would like to ask when will be the seminar held. How many days will it take and how many hours in a day will we have to engage. What time would the training be started and ended?
Secondly, I would also want to know what would be the topic outline of the program, the things we are required to bring something in and what would be the benefits for us Registered nurses who will be attending the seminar.
And finally, I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Since I am living here in the Philippines and Singapore is about 3 1/2 hours from my country and I have no any relatives or friends in that country. Will you be helping us to settle our staying place or do we need to have a booking in a hotel? And also because it is my first time to travel abroad, I do not know how much will I be needing to spend with it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours faithfully,
R. Olivar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...diogram thorough training in Singapore. I am writing to you today because I would...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... 3 1/2 hours from my country and I have no any relatives or friends in that countr...
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Line 9, column 407, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...l abroad, I do not know how much will I be needing to spend with it. I am looking forwa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49480968858 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6175593828 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2695616409 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219808330712 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804353856919 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11380625324 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119931754473 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456199400488 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.