Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident.
You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
You need to explain the following:
» When and where you hired it?
» Describe how the accident happened?
» What kind of action did you take after the accident?
Dear Sir,
I am a regular customer of your company who rented a car on last Wednesday at your Tambaram branch. It is a luxury class Honda car.
After hiring, we went on with our planned trip that is to Goa. To our dismay, while we were crossing Bangalore highway road, a cow got in to the middle of the road and apparently, I lost control of the vehicle, and I hit the vehicle which came in opposite direction. Fortunately, members inside the car did not get hurt; however, it was not without any damage to the car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a regular customer of your company ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nch. It is a luxury class Honda car. After hiring, we we...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not without any damage to the car. So, immediately I too...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... So, immediately I took the vehicle to a nearest service station and they found ...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...e station and they found that there was a damage in car bumper and radiator. Eventually,...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y spares which was damaged in the car. As a loyal customer,...
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Line 15, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ar. Yours faithfully, Madhusudhanan.S
^
Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243386243386 0.220444632235 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.148148148148 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.037037037037 0.0606518309736 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.0506257000042 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.100529100529 0.118615021944 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100529100529 0.107062808482 94% => OK
Participles: 0.021164021164 0.041066498444 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62850178404 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037037037037 0.0385302599488 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.10582010582 0.0714148451538 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010582010582 0.0191574576366 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021164021164 0.00930345855455 227% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1044.0 1141.60824742 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.134020619 81% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28915662651 5.53046319177 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289156626506 0.284621296913 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222891566265 0.211203875043 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126506024096 0.133321485273 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0843373493976 0.0843313296314 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62850178404 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.0271411173 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7429391974 44.7399317507 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 90.9928171075 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 7.22680412371 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.8891566265 37.5504026743 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.23214285714 1.13073093955 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379751003275 0.331212695627 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0948610016027 0.0927372745006 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0516672411035 0.0736520305886 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.714124064493 0.662452444078 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.2103749607 0.233577193048 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136568544582 0.122183219658 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699329146929 0.0765303033291 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.109516239686 0.110270004696 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.145161542257 0.120535355502 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124041867221 0.120397337282 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11835507309 0.113578534861 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.54639175258 66% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.0824742268 370% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.62886597938 38% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.25773195876 97% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 8.0 Out of 9