Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask some more questions about the trip
It gives me immense pleasure to nominate my participation for the school trip that is going to take place over the next weekend.
When my daughter told me about the trip, i was so fascinated by the whole idea. As a working parent i do not get enough time to spend with my daughter, this trip would give me an opportunity to know her more.
I know few people at that place so we can get good deal when it comes to resorts and adventure sports. I would like to extend my help when it comes to in whichever way possible.
In the end, i would like to know how many students are willing to participate in this event and how school community is planning to make this trip a successful event.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hen my daughter told me about the trip, i was so fascinated by the whole idea. As...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... by the whole idea. As a working parent i do not get enough time to spend with my...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... whichever way possible. In the end, i would like to know how many students ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 560.0 937.175257732 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24242424242 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41678540603 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643939393939 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 178.2 290.88556701 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7721925939 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 4.34317383033 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150998286331 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742832737924 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431883740958 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911004009305 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299164117219 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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