Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should:
• say when and where you will meet him/her
• explain where he/she will stay
• tell him/her about the other arrangements you made
Dear Jack Brown,
My name is James Smith, your co-worker from the sales department in the head office in Toronto, and I am writing this letter in regard to inform you about the arrangements made for your 5-day visit in order to attend the annual senior managers meeting.
To begin with, in order to leave London to get to Toronto in time, I have booked the flight with the number HR789, which departs on December 16th in your city. Therefore, the company’s driver is going to pick you up at midnight the next day at Toronto International Airport. After some hours of rest, we will meet one another in my office at around 12 pm, the location is attached below for your convenience.
During your stay, some provisions have been made for you by Mr. Green, the CEO, to stay in the 5-star hotel named the Central Hotel of Toronto. It comprises various sections, such as a swimming pool, a spa, a gym, a restaurant and s shopping center. So, almost all the needed amenities are available for you to enjoy your stay.
Furthermore, I have arranged some other non-related to work activities, such as a visit to the museum in downtown, going to the Niagara Waterfall, and some other monuments and landmarks of the city which I am positive you will find them fascinating.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best regards,
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, so, therefore, such as, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70464135021 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55662779284 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7823198378 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29158666576 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09826723623 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667288141094 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145230552571 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526553213903 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.