Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:Explain why you cannot go anymoreSay who can go instead of you

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Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Mahi,

First of all, I would like to thank you for considering me for a movie plan. But, I regret to say that, I would not be able to join you because some important official work has suddenly come up which cannot be postponed. As I have told you earlier, I have a review meet the following week for which I was working on a presentation. My boss wants to look at the first draft by today end of day.

However, my roomate is very keen to see this film and if you are comfortable, she can acompany you this time. I am sure that you will enjoy watching picture with her as she has an extremely good sense of humour which will multiply the fun of the movie as it is of comic genre.

I am not feeling good as I am ditching you at the eleventh hour. Hope you understand my situation. I promise you that we will be going for the movie over the weekend.

Yours friendly
Prerna

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18604651163 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34448710691 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6238466896 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313889600663 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126523187782 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675665782701 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188417533145 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317736833659 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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