The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one langu

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.

What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world

Although English becoming the solo language with the growth of tourism is thought advantageous by many, other consider it can be detrimental. One language helps in maintaining cordial relations across globe and helps in growth of business but there are certain drawbacks to be taken into account.

On the one hand, there are number of advantages of English becoming the single language with the development of tourism. Firstly, one language helps in developing cordial relationship by means of easy communication. Communication is a two way process and is considered healthy when both parties understand and respond to each other well. Secondly, this helps students from various parts of the world to study the courses they wanted in any country. Language will not be a barrier anymore in achieving their dreams. Thirdly, having one language can do wonders in business world also. Business and traders will no longer be requiring translaters for the deal or message they want to convey to their clients or stakeholders.

On the other hand, one problem with adopting single language world-wide is that the future generation of the countries will not be able to know the rich cultural heritage of their country that possess in the form of local language. This will lead to further decrease in the personal connect that people have when they interact in their dialect. Another issue with this is that some countries may loose their identity as they are renowned for their rich languages. It is therefore called that there is unity in diversity in India.

In conclusion, while there are merits of one language used globally, it can also lead to danger to cultural heritage and identity crises for same countries.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12099644128 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6934588701 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5129632091 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329721040752 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115237141518 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935296659044 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189605173521 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676761603107 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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