your friend is having problems getting on with a colleague at work. He/she has written to you for some advice
In your letter
-Thank your friend for their letter
- suggest some ways your friend could improve the situation
- offer some encouragement
Hi dear Sara,
I am really sad to hear about your dilemma at work. As you know I have a lot of experience regarding the issue and can offer you some wisdom.
It made me extremely happy that you felt comfortable enough to share your story with me. There are lots of people who you could have contacted them for their consult. I am honored to be the one you choose to reach for. I truly appreciate your confidence in me and promise you that your words are safe with me.
Since it is your first experience as a manager assistant, it is quit acceptable to feel challenged and even disrespected. Although Some tasks are not officially part of the job such as buying coffee or lunch as you mentioned in your letter, they are expected of an assistant to be done without nagging. Besides, a person doing such jobs are required to be available all week long and sometimes on the weekends. Therefore, it is normal to be called to work on Friday.
All in All, I think you need to let go of your ego and do not think about what an assistance should or should not be asked to do. Simply do whatever your superior expects from you as long as it is morally right. I am sure after passing some time you are going to fall into a routine and be satisfied with yourself.
Looking forward to hearing good news of your progress,
Best wishes,
Behnaz Yousefi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi dear Sara, I am really sad to hear about your dilem...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing good news of your progress, Best wishes, Behnaz Yousefi
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ews of your progress, Best wishes, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, i think, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48207171315 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42249422664 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6128525916 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3571428571 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300833439645 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100246718368 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494416462408 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167215676659 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494988538856 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.