Your local city council has decided to pull down the oldest building in your area because of monetary problems. Write a letter to the planning manager. In your letter
– Say why this building is important to you
– Explain what purpose this building can serve in the future
– Suggest possible ways to generate funds for the repair work.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request you to reconsider the local council’s decision regarding the demolition of the oldest building in the Central City area.
This ancient building was built in the early 18th century by the British rulers, therefore, it is a heritage of not only our locality but also for this city. In addition, doors and interiors of the building are made of African blackwood which is apart from being extremely expensive is rare to find these days. Since it is a marvellous piece of structural engineering, demolishing it is highly unfair.
As this building has a significant amount of historical and aesthetic value, once it is repaired, will bring a tremendous amount of money by serving as a famous tourist spot. With an upsurge of tourists, it would bring employment opportunities for local restaurants, shopping complex and hotels. Indeed, in the long run, it has a lot to offer economically to our city.
I understand your concern about getting funding for the renovation work; therefore, I suggest you organise charity events along with some fundraisers going door-to-door in order to collect much-required funds. Certainly, residents will contribute and appreciate your step.
Hope you would consider my plea favourably.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34951456311 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01340205585 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679611650485 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0742592977 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250048696726 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762802032389 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633906536343 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114086453217 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696938807141 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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