Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
- explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
- describe the position effects on local people if the center closes.
At least 150 words. Begin your letter as follow: Dear Sir or Madame.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, your council has decided to close down sports and leisure centre. However, this decision seems to be made haphazardly,as we believe it doesn't seems to be a great idea and would like to recommend to reconsider your decision.
Let me explain you in detail. As, this sports centre has been beneficial for local population. Currently, in era of technology when children are too busy with their mobile phones. Sports and leisure complex has contributed and kept children busy with extra curricular activities. Moreover, centre has been a place where local people communicate with each other and talk about different topics. Furthermore, in past various artists have performed and large events have taken place for local community.
However, if leisure centre is shutdown, this will cause a lot of problems for local population and also, a negative message will be conveyed on behalf of local council. Therefore, it is requested to consider your decision and change it in favour of local community.
Thanks,
Yours Sincerely,
Alan
Comments
Dear Sir or madam,
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing to you regarding the announced plans to close the Recreation Centre of Lower Binfield. This Centre plays an essential role in the life of my family. My parents both visit the swimming pool of the Centre. My sister is an active member of local theatre. My grandmother takes dancing classes with her friends, and my grandfather regularly wins chess championship of the town. All these facilities are kindly provided to the community by the Centre.
Thanks to this organization, children of our town are able to develop themselves both physically and mentally. Adults have an ability to be healthy and retired persons can spend their leisure time together.
In case of bringing this intention to life, everyone loses. Decreased number of sports opportunities will increase the load to the healthcare system. The absence of leisure activities may influence the crime rate among youths. Elderly persons become less happy and will tend to spend their time watching TV.
I hope that the local council will take my thoughts into consideration and will revise the plans of closing the Recreational Centre.
Faithfully yours,
Janet Jane
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. Recen...
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...is decision seems to be made haphazardly,as we believe it doesnt seems to be a grea...
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...to be made haphazardly,as we believe it doesnt seems to be a great idea and would like...
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...ms to be a great idea and would like to recommend to reconsider your decision. Let me explain you i...
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...recommend to reconsider your decision. Let me explain you in detail. As, this s...
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...s have taken place for local community. However, if leisure centre is shutdown, ...
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Suggestion:
...change it in favour of local community. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Alan
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...favour of local community. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Alan
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...nity. Thanks, Yours Sincerely, Alan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29714285714 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68555622635 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4550459333 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284417700374 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102788214727 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742516690556 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175288827952 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038518941361 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.