Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take

Dear Mr.Brown,

Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of the spirits. I am inscribing this piece of epistle to express sincere apology for the incovenience inflicted due to our behavior yesterday. The reason behind noise was the welcoming house party as we moved in this flat last week.

Frankly speaking, it was a surprise party by our beloved friends and we were not aware regarding the arrangments. Since, it has been only 4 days in this apartment thus we were not familiar with the rules and regulation of the scoiety. Onwards from now we will keep such important things in consideration.

Undoubtedly, in the time of emergency neighbour is the first companion for support. Therefore to maintain a cordial and collaborative relations with you, i will try to put efforts not to distrube your surroundings again. It would be highly appreciable if you accept my apology and lets have new start.

I anticipate this incident would not stand in the way of our friendship.

Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Brown
Dear Mr.Brown, Hello! Hope this letter finds you i...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...our is the first companion for support. Therefore to maintain a cordial and collaborative...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l and collaborative relations with you, i will try to put efforts not to distrube...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ppreciable if you accept my apology and lets have new start. I anticipate this in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05747126437 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.852404863 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9744829317 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201492428061 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667491434923 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572960345381 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837023631265 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770494557304 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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