Advantages CHILDREN ENJOY and disadvantages THEY FACE from when living in an extende family.
Nowadays in many countries, especially developing ones, a large number of young people and children live in multi-generation families – they are in those with grandparents, uncles, aunts, or cousins, besides their parents. They enjoy some advantages from their small family. However, in a few cases, they may also face several disadvantages when living in such an extended family.
On the one hand, children in this kind of family have some benefits. grandparents’experience can help children to prepare for their life. For example, in my family, my grandparents usually teach me a wide range of useful lessons such as distingushing what is right or wrong through fairy tales. Moreover, families with several generations in the same house help with financial problems. For instance, my aunts, my uncles or my grandparents can lend money to my parents when they need to pay for electric bills and so on.
On the other hand, they sometimes face some drawbacks from living in a large family.
One is that adults such as grandparents have old-fashioned ways of thinking and living so children may feel difficult to follow the members of the family. For examle, grandparents can prohibit chidren from using laptop or a smart phones because they think it is harmful.
But they don’t know that there are many online courses for students so their attitudes are sometimes outdated. Futhermore, children may become reliant on their grandparents. For instance, after a meal, grandparents often wash the dishes for their children because they love them and they think children have a plenty of homework to do.
All in all, the role of adults in a multi-generation family is important as they contribute to helping children distinguish what is right or wrong in the real life and they also help with financial problems. Nevertheless, they think in an old-fashioned way and they make children become dependent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to pay for electric bills and so on. On the other hand, they sometimes face s...
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...dren have a plenty of homework to do. All in all, the role of adults in a mult...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an old-fashioned way" with adverb for "old-fashioned"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...cial problems. Nevertheless, they think in an old-fashioned way and they make children become dependent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18654167818 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3925601685 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355028729667 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127081909153 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119283468356 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209172626487 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136337134731 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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