Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Technology nowadays has made it possible to advertise like never before, as a result we are constantly bombarded with ads all the time. While sometimes we are aware of it, other times we aren’t. Therefore, some people believe that this is having a negative impact on our lives, whereas others argue the opposite. In this essay I will discuss both views and tell you why I believe that the downsides outweigh any potential benefit.
Those who support advertisements do so because of two main reasons. Firstly, it makes it easier for consumers to choose and buy products that they are interested in. Before commercials, people would have to rely on word of mouth but now it’s possible to get all the information about the product in the advertisement. Companies like Facebook and Instagram use algorithms that suggest only those commercials that you’re interested in, which makes it easier to shop. The second reason is that ads can be very entertaining sometimes. In today’s busy and serious world, a small funny clip can be very refreshing, even if it’s trying to sell you something. Indeed some companies rely solely on comedic aspect for the sales of their products, like Cheetos or Cadbury chocolates.
Even though ads can have some upsides, I believe it has more negative impacts on the society. I believe that most of the times we are bombarded with commercials for things that we do not need. The aggressive sales technique cause us to buy useless things which we have no real need for. Ridiculously expensive electronic gadgets and clothing are a good example of this. Secondly, it’s leading to a rise in depression, as we are constantly looking at the products that we can’t afford. This makes us compare ourselves to our peers who have those products and have a negative impact on our mental health.
So in conclusion, although advertisements can have some perceived beneficial impacts, they are very negligible. In my opinion, these non -stop commercials have grave side effects, such are making us waste money and causing depression.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03498542274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78479227975 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6198503372 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8947368421 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105433177968 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333393898195 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369300927711 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727314845069 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046397450958 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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