Advertising is influencing people more and more.
Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and examples
Advertisement plays a crucial role in our daily life and decision. Influences of advertisement in people life become a controversial debate. There are many debating about negative and positive impacts of it. some people think it is a positive trend while others swear by negative trends that is partly because of they believe advertiser’s owners try to manipulate people’ distinguishing by giving them exaggerated information. The best example for this is kids who cannot discriminate the advertising tricks and oblige their parent to buy useless stuffs. Also, it should be noted that the issue can go beyond can causes serious problems. In some case, they use beautiful models to present their cosmetic which mislead the viewers that their aesthetics is due to make up materials.
In spite of all possible disadvantages of advertisement, it has many merits for people who would like to buy stuffs and inform them about their choices in the topical markets which allowing them to gain access to large reservoirs of information. It is no wonder why advertisement is introduced as a modern business since the studies reveal that it reduces the unemployment all around the world to the halve. Apart from that, it is considered as an entertainment and informer among people who seek new updates of technology and new stuffs.
To wrap it up, it gives me the sense that debates do not lead anywhere fruitful. As I mention before people are split on this opinion, since, both, together would have their logical reasons and it will be exceedingly hard to deny one side but in my opinion, advertisement is a handy tool which can made people life better if government resolute strict rules for every advertisement which is displayed for children and sets fines for owner of exaggerated advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...swear by negative trends that is partly because of they believe advertiser's owners try to...
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Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
... noted that the issue can go beyond can causes serious problems. In some case, they us...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he unemployment all around the world to the halve. Apart from that, it is considered as a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, apart from, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02423367434 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631756756757 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1696428091 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224375104814 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751304790801 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670303850413 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139822891494 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779110797229 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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