All inventions and discoveries like the discovery of fire and electricity have impacts on our lives so much that people can no longer live without them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some human being approaches like a discovery of fire and electricity have an important role in our life mainly because those, make people live easily, and also can access different methods in other parts of the world. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss some inventions, discoveries and paraphrase them with examples.
Firstly, the primary human discovered fire that it was so important that caused in History science created an era as “Fire era”. After that discovery, other materials discovered by human beings, especially metal. Therefore, with the finding of metal people who lived that time could create metal instruments for hunting, and made another era as “Metal era”, so we can see that with simple discovers people could put their feet in other stages of their life.
Secondly, some inventors with inventions help people to save their time, energy and something like that. For example, Thomas Edison that invented electricity helps all worlds in different parts, especially for industry section. Without electricity, we cannot access any new technology that supported by it.
Thirdly, thanks to some inventions and discoveries human could face obstacles that maybe will be occurred in their future. For instance, some inventions that we can see nowadays cause a big revolution in medical sciences, and even some parts of human sciences.
Last but not least, when we overview all history of inventions or new findings we will understand necessarily all findings or invention do not important for our life namely some electronic gadgets.
To conclude, we can consider an important role for invention in our life. Most of them so important, and before they would be invented we felt the empty place of them in our life. In my opinion, most of them bring for us a new sense of independence.
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From the long times ago that
From the long times ago that people were not civilized till now so many inventions have found. I believe that most of those have remarkably affected the human's life that they cannot live without them.
First and foremost, there are some fundamental discoveries including fire and wheel discovered by early humans that in modern years we still use them. Albeit, early humans just used fire for cooking and sending messages but as time passed they learned to use it in disparate ways. To clarify this point, after a while they used it for making a sword or other instruments that helped them for hunting or defending against enemy and wild animals. Furthermore, these days not only do we use fire for those purposes that our ancestors used, but also we use fire for more professional things such as melting iron and building houses. Thus it can be deduced that we cannot deny the impact of basic inventions in our life.
On the other hand, a discovery might result in a new one. A perfect example that illustrates this issue is electricity. I think that considering the world without electricity is somehow not imaginable for everyone. The result behind this is simply because electricity has caused to invent many other facilities such as TV, the computer, refrigerator, cellphone, the internet and many other things that living without them makes the life tough.
One the whole, I believe that all the inventions that are made by human facilitate our life in different ways. There are so many fruitful discoveries that we cannot live without them and should be indeed grateful for having them.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23905723906 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76594356997 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1898119049 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230867489499 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078963666352 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547093561944 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122545666821 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056933596241 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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