In some countries, it is illegal for an employer to reject job applications on the basis of age criteria. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, there are different laws for both employers and employee like, and they have to obey them. However, is a controversial criterion to employ in different countries, and in some countries count as an illegal thing to reject a job application, but from my point of view, is a good criterion. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss the merits and demerits of this issue.
Firstly, in many developed countries, employers prefer to employ persons in legal ages and consider it as the main point. On the other hand, in some developing countries, employers enforce children to work in low ages with the low salary. Therefore, we can find a lot of child labors in those countries.
Secondly, in countries with good economic, social levels, governments try to make a space for people who want to study and enforce companies and factories to employ them in low ages, so people can follow their education without any anxieties. However, there are other factors those employers, bosses and other people who want to employ someone they would be better consider.
Last but not least, there are different and almost other important factors that employers should be considered such as level of education, practical skills, experiences, and so on. From my point of view, sometimes age criteria is an unfair reason to reject job applications, but in some countries mainly because of their poor laws is suitable.
To conclude, the advantages of age criteria outweigh the disadvantages because, in low ages, employers abuse from people, and ignore their laws and rights. For this reason, it would be better define some rules for employer according to laws.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07636363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75348854611 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7847449861 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259200321125 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966544526554 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693462054129 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150788793153 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543881808249 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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