Art is considered an essential part in all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science ,technology and business. Why do you think that is happening? What could be done to encourage more people to take interst in arts?
Art and craft has played occlusal park in all cultures across the globe. From evolution of cave paintings to canvas, making sculptures to building monuments, the beauty and significance of art can be witnessed in every sphere of life. However, it is to be noted that less people appreciate art and emphasize more on science, technology and business.
Due to revolution in human existence from ancient age to modern period developments in science have also taken place. Gone are the days when people had to to travel for days and months on bullock carts and horses, and also, send and receive messages from people living at distant places through by means of pigeons and messengers. People who are at antipods can exchange texts through mobile phones. The introduction of different modes of transport such as car, motorbike, ship and aeroplane have made travelling and trading much more convenient.
Moreover, advancement in medical sciences has enabled doctors enabled to achieve task which was once considered impossible. Researches have discovered cure for many deadly problems such as polio, cancer and organ transplant. Also, research for eradication of various diseases is under process some of which have been successful in the past. As far as business is concerned, people are prioritising business more to make a living for themselves and their family members. The world today is facing cut-throat competition in business sector which has made human beings machines who work day and night to make the most out of their time and earn a sufficient amount.
Furthermore, in order to encourage people to take interst in arts certain measures should be initiated. The government should introduce some awareness programmes where people are educated about the importance of art. Art galleries and museums should be constructed to restore art and reach audience. The school authorities should organise art competitions to boost the interest of children in art and enhance their creativity.
Conclusively, more people should be encouraged to take interst in arts as the past is the key to present and future. Art represents culture and heritage. It depicts about past events, therefore, it holds great importance in the modern era.
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Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28770949721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79343156096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6610882752 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6315789474 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229311621577 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739422268892 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627602809634 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128381923213 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636712355948 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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