Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. Why do you think that is. What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts.
There is no doubt that all the curriculum are significant role in human life such as arts, science, business and language. But, now in this era fewer people fascinate choose to others fields than arts. I think people not interest to know the own culture and tradition, with describe this statement that how to encourage more individual to take participate in arts.
There are number of plenty reason people choose to the technical, bussiness and science curriculum. These include enchanced employment, practical work. Firstly, individual wants to reputation job, high salary for lives to sedentary lifestyle, with buy to the cars, cell phone and living in luxurious house as show off the status in society. Moreover, some people do not like to work in company and wait to salary, so for that they would be open to the self bussiness which help to growth the economy and experience.
However, I believe that arts subjects more help to aware the own culture and tradition with gain to more knowledge about our ancestors and home country. Secondly, if government open to the museums, arts centre where they provide free knowledge and taught to painting and social work then, the not very affluent people more motivate to interest in arts curriculum than higher education. Additionally, this subject through people settled in one good profession, more chance to do practical work , with increase the experience and earn to more money for family then, away to the financial problem.
In conclude, it can be seen that whereas the arts has brought some disadvantages in terms of low paid salary and not take higher education, it's advantages such as away to the own financial nuisance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02150537634 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63419187546 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6993284138 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17702985551 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624788154489 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346154680595 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941698482223 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424249735499 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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