The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the recent days, there has been a debate whether people's health is likely to diminish in the future or not. In order to understand it better, it is good to bear in mind some important points, for instance, the lack of time people face being related to the increased consumption of fast food, as well as the amount of exercise taken.
First of all, it's worth considering that people are becoming busier than before, as they seem to be working extreme hours, most of the time in front of computers, and in some occasions not having a proper break. As a result, they end up eating some type of unhealthy lunch whereas working, instead of having an adequate meal.
Furthermore, the amount of fast food, or even take away, has been increasing considerably, which can also be related to the fact of not having enough time. What is more, we seem to be living in an era where the skill of cooking is not as important as in the past. Therefore, the quality of food eaten has become lower.
Another factor to be considered is that sedentary work is in evidence, instead of physical work, and also the reliance on cars is increasing. Moreover, with the greater use of technology available, it's easier to simply order something online rather than to go to the physical store, which means less exercise are taken.
To sum up, I personally believe that the quality of health is prone to face a decrease in the near future, as it’s being negatively affected by the new lifestyle of this generation.
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- Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving.Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. Do you Agree? 73
- The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...uture or not. In order to understand it better, it is good to bear in mind some import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66917293233 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55035776345 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3126226707 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150331405465 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570433931281 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03962172253 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076550098003 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024952602548 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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