Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction .Do you agree or disagree
it is beleived that ,it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage rather than job satisfaction . I disagree with this statement due to some reasons such as carreer growth and sense of fulfilment
One good reason to hold this view is that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfilment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone earn high salary but feels tensed and compromised with conscience he would not enjoy his life. To instance , A lot of reasearchers in the world keep up with their roles researching academic issues in society with low income because they are passionate about science. That’s why it is more important to select a kind of work that make happy than to look only if high salary.
Another point to consider that doing what you like keep you motivated and therefore lead to career growth. There is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity. Individual who love their can easily excel in their field of works and achieve better results than those who put salary on first place. So, job satisfaction is vital as compare to big pay scale.
In conclusion, high salary does not matter in front of job satisfaction for the folks. People should give priority to that work which give them internal happiness and they would choose that job to bring laurels in their life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79475982533 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60401755069 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.919763178 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29777689002 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10855348381 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682796346793 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169466816806 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539484022395 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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