Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary
in materialistic world, vacational is a platform of financial income for most of people. Some people argue that the high salary should be more concerned than the degree of satisfaction in job.In my perspective, I partly advocate with the given statement.
To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genuine ambition to mankind.With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a big budget monthly, people can invest to themself such as buying new clothes, traveling, ... To peple who have commercial vision , they can use their income for invest real estate which is one of the most potential market at the present.It is clear to see that having big income from occupy expand many oppoturnity for improving life standard and expanding property. In further case, financial income symbolize the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise your position in society. one of the particular evidence is Jack Ma, a famous billionaires in the world.He had been a normal citizen in the past until he became a billionaire, his reputation become widespread and many young people treat his succeed as inspiration.
In the other hand ,salary is not an unique component contributing to your achievement in job. In fact , attitude is the fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for money is easily dispirited with their job because of the lack of stimulation. In psychology, worker can face with some mental disease as for working in out of their professional for a long time. For instance, worker who find much obstacle on their vacational generating negative emotion which possibility causing depressed or emotion disorder.
In conclusion, although inspiration in work is a fundemental part , having a big income for the betterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the priority condition for considering occupy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in materialistic world, vacational is a pl...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...l is a platform of financial income for most of people. Some people argue that the high salary...
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...with the given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genu...
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... given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genuine...
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...,having an significant income in job is an genuine ambition to mankind.With the bi...
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Suggestion: many demands
...With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life namely as leisure,education, cl...
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Suggestion: , education
...rd many demand in life namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a b...
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...fe namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a big budget mo...
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...he most potential market at the present.It is clear to see that having big income ...
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...lize the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise...
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...ze the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise your...
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... Ma, a famous billionaires in the world.He had been a normal citizen in the past u...
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Suggestion: ,
...cceed as inspiration. In the other hand ,salary is not an unique component contri...
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...tion. In the other hand ,salary is not an unique component contributing to your a...
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...ting to your achievement in job. In fact , attitude is the fundemental decide your...
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...he fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mo...
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... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...job because of the lack of stimulation. In psychology, worker can face with some m...
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Suggestion: ,
...nspiration in work is a fundemental part , having a big income for the betterment ...
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Suggestion: .
... the betterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...etterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely on your frst ...
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Suggestion: Hence
...actory rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18731117825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03099422793 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5328355138 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123983632049 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498732177481 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441863199941 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860459249046 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262248700529 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in materialistic world, vacational is a pl...
^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...l is a platform of financial income for most of people. Some people argue that the high salary...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... than the degree of satisfaction in job.In my perspective, I partly advocate with ...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
...with the given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genu...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genuine...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...,having an significant income in job is an genuine ambition to mankind.With the bi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...n job is an genuine ambition to mankind.With the big salary , people can afford many...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ambition to mankind.With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life n...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun demand seems to be countable; consider using: 'many demands'.
Suggestion: many demands
...With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life namely as leisure,education, cl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , education
...rd many demand in life namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...fe namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a big budget mo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ... To peple who have commercial vision , they can use their income for invest re...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...he most potential market at the present.It is clear to see that having big income ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lize the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ze the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise your...
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Suggestion: One
...job can raise your position in society. one of the particular evidence is Jack Ma, ...
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Suggestion: He
... Ma, a famous billionaires in the world.He had been a normal citizen in the past u...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cceed as inspiration. In the other hand ,salary is not an unique component contri...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tion. In the other hand ,salary is not an unique component contributing to your a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ting to your achievement in job. In fact , attitude is the fundemental decide your...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...job because of the lack of stimulation. In psychology, worker can face with some m...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nspiration in work is a fundemental part , having a big income for the betterment ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the betterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...etterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely on your frst ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...actory rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the ...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the pri...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18731117825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03099422793 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5328355138 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123983632049 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498732177481 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441863199941 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860459249046 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262248700529 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.