Buying things like air ticket, groceries on the internet is becoming more popular.
Does the advantages of internet buying outweighs the disadvantage?
It is true that online marketing is becoming increasingly popular. Purchasing items such as writing materials, groceries and air tickets on the internet has become a trend, This essay argues that the merits of internet buying outweighs the drawbacks. It will first demonstrates that online buying saves time and it is less stressful followed by analysis of a possible demerits namely, purchasing fake products and exorbitant prices of goods.
On one hand, buying goods from the internet saves time. Online market offers the consumer with variety of goods to purchase within minutes. Interestingly, Goods such as clothes, shoes, hand bags as well as perishable goods are always on display at online mini stores like JiJiji.com and konga.com hence, buyers can order these items and it would be delivered to their door post within minutes without waste of time. Additionally, individuals with busy schedule prefer to shop online because it prevent them from additional stress like, getting stocked in the traffic while journeying to a conventional market. But shopping online prevents such occurrence as the ordered goods will be delivered within the snap of a finger thus preventing stress.
On the other hand, one possible disadvantage of internet shopping is that, sometimes, fake products with low value and durability are often packaged to the consumers. Reason being that most online marketers are not usually sincere. A case in point is a neighbor who recently odered for a beautiful dress from the internet, on receiving the clothes, the quality was rather inferior. Furthermore, prices of goods on the internet are extremely exorbitant compare to the conventional market. This could be due to cost of transporting or way billing the products to the final consumer. More so, it could also be as a result of online sellers trying to make excessive gain from the purchased goods thus; reason for increased in the cost of commodity. In addition, a great deal of online marketers are fraudulent in nature, sometimes, they insist on payment before delivery of goods and ones the transaction has been done by the customer or consumer, they go incognito. This is a major set back of online marketing.
In conclusion, it is agreeable that online shopping is trending nowadays, although this has some demerits such as purchasing fake products and high cost of goods, this essay argued that internet buying is beneficial because it saves time and prevent people with busy schedule from undergoing stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2103960396 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.755646501 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1644576735 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.823529412 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178881491561 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651334500438 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929479992203 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132515956196 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101397229494 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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