Some people think that economic development is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others argue that economic development is damaging the environment and needs to stop. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The role of economic growth is pivotal to both the citizens and the environment. While some intellectuals argue that it curbs hunger and poverty, others however believe that it has negative impact on the environment. This essay agrees that economic development eliminate poverty and hunger, it will discuss both sides and give a concluding view.
On one hand, those who view the growth of the economy as means eradicating hunger and poverty feels it create jobs to citizens. It is an indisputable fact that majority of the the people residing in developed nations are free from impoverishment due to the availability and accessibility of industries, finance and material resources to meet ends. The United Kingdom is a typical example, because of it massive economic growth, they do not only provide employments for their citizens alone but they also make provision for immigrants from developing countries. Additionally, supporters of this idea also assume that those with extreme age; elderly and children are well taken of in nations with good economic growth.
On the other hand, opponents of good economy assume that it is detrimental to the ecosystem because of the effect of industrialisation on the environment. The fumes and waste produced in the oil and gas and aviation industry constitute nuisance to the earth; depletion of Ozon layer, noise and air pollution and the destruction of aquatic lives. Furthermore, there is the problem of deforestation and extinction of wildlife. In a research conducted by the National Geography in 2018, it was estimated that in the next 20 years some species of Hippopotamus and Elephant would be completely eradicated due to bush burning.
In conclusion, they are diverse views on economic growth, although some people feels that its eradicate impoverish lifestyle because of industrialisation, others are of the opinion that it destroys the ecosystem by deplelting the ozon layer However, this essay agrees that economic growth eliminate low livelihood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34384858044 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0800664768 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9404480442 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263023302925 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882661377444 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863700364544 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164710382759 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108500668203 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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