Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Purchasing daily essentials, books, clothes, etc. from e-commerce websites is a growing trend. While there exists a considerable amount of disadvantages associated with it, I believe that the advantages clearly outweigh them.
In this era of technology, the use of e-commerce websites to buy materials tends to be a faster and an efficient way. Recently, I decided to replace the chimney at my house. Now, because of the technology, I can just surf over the internet sitting at my house and compare all the different models available in the market without being exhausted which would have been the case if I had traveled across the city from one shop to another. While doing that I would have had to carry a scratchpad to write all the details down about all the chimneys that were shown to me. Another advantage is that there are a lot more options available on the internet than the local stores.
The main disadvantage that bothers people usually deals with queries like, "what if the cloth doesn't fit me?", "what if the order is defective?", etc. At the basic level, all these queries boil down to the topic of return and replacement policy of the shopping website, which nowadays is clearly mentioned and is easily located. If the cloth doesn't fit you, you can return or replace it, if an item is defective, you can do the same. In the current pandemic (Covid-19), online shopping is even more beneficial and less hazardous as you don't have to get out of your house to buy the item. Social distancing is automatically followed which would lead to less spreading of the disease.
Looking at the above statements, I believe it is safe to say that the advantages of e-commerce websites do really outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90235690236 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83160379021 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6566093404 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140448567084 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448196340612 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416861310899 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799925733342 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118558670699 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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