Indisputably, shopping online comes with a great risk and uncertainity of the quality of th products. Nevetheless, the benefits offered by various websites in terms of shopping cannot be dismissed entirely. Thus, it is not surprising to support the growing popularity of online shopping.
The main concern raised by consumers regarding shopping is their distrust towards the products that are being delivered. Many comment about the deceiving nature of the websites in their advertisements and display pictures prior the sale or purchase. But, these days many customers are providing valuble feedback, ratings, reviews, pictures and videos that are quite informative and detailed. Since these reviews are made by the shoppers and not the manufacturers, the shopping population is more actively participating in the online activity. Moreover, all the shopping websites have adopted return policies to appease the customers dissatisfaction. This innovation has seen as a way to abate the fears of quality of the products made by the customers.
Additionally, this act of shifting the entire process of buying online reduces huge physical activity encountered by people when shopping. The endless wait near the counter, the carrying of the baggage to home and most importantly, the struggling for finding parking slots for vehicles can be avoided. Though, people might argue that the act of strolling in shops and looking for needed items in real life is more pleasurable, it is not true in all cases. Chirtmas shopping is a great example to illustrate the case. Internet is better at offering last minute deliveries and shopping requests than most shops present in the localities during festivities. Adding to this, with the crowds surrounding the shops, it is almost impossible to stroll around the area liesurely and shop peacefully.
Furthermore, unlike in real life, where the customers have to visit every place themselves to compare the prices and look for sales, the internet offers a single website where one can visualise all the sales available at the moment on a particular product. The Amazon search engine provides a huge range of collection regarding the desired product within various price ranges. The consumer has no difficulty in selecting their product in their budget. Moreover, the website also offers delivery option with a small cost. Heavy purchases does not come with the burden of need for trasportation as internet takes care of it.
In conclusion, the act of buying things online comes with both benefits and drawbacks. But, with the recent surge in customers, the websites offereing these services are moulding themselves to fit the needs of the consumers. With constant evolution of online shopping to carter the requirements of the users, it is quite easy to dismiss the disadvantages presented by the internet in terms of shopping.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun comment seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many comments'.
Suggestion: Many comments
... the products that are being delivered. Many comment about the deceiving nature of the websi...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... adopted return policies to appease the customers dissatisfaction. This innovation has se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33039647577 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88488745656 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552863436123 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4731106091 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.217391304 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12653388002 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362129772142 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272896918164 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691193829292 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341010352809 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.