Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tickets
...gs such as groceries, books, airplane tickets. therefore, with the development of tec...
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Line 17, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...s groceries, books, airplane tickets. therefore, with the development of technology all...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... of technology all they have to do is to click the mouse and pay for everything ...
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Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hand
...0pt;line-height:107%'>On the one hand, there are several benefits of online s...
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Line 37, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Purchase
...e which gave people an opportunity to purchase a better price. For instance, in Viet N...
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Line 39, column 21, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun supermarket seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of supermarkets'.
Suggestion: a lot of supermarkets
... lot of promotion campaign running by a lot of supermarket in order to encourage people to buy g...
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Line 43, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Result
...e if ordering online and pre-paid, as result not only of its convenience but also ha...
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Line 49, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...ings that are needed but when they do have time all they would want is to stay at ...
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Line 51, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ow-off some steam. Hence, shopping is a best way to release stress but how abou...
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Line 53, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... stress but how about having a chance to not step outside of the house but you s...
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Line 53, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...e house but you still can do the shops. therefore, buying things online has placed a vi...
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Line 71, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hands
...t;line-height:107%'>On the other hands, buying things online can be a detrimen...
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Line 71, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... online can be a detrimental sometimes. Because on-screen bargain is by picture only ...
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Line 75, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Can
...ome point when the product arrived it can be opposite to what we see online. More...
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Line 93, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Much
...demanding without having to waste too much time and effort on doing minority thing...
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Line 93, column 74, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bewared'?
Suggestion: bewared
...ority things. However, people should be beware of what they saw online and make sure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2938.0 1615.20841683 182% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.70776255708 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.94390555509 2.80592935109 354% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.613211348 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.090909091 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8181818182 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.38176352705 936% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078544591514 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397941868307 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247590369256 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297173198771 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452311391198 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.23 12.4159519038 179% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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