For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list.
To what extent do you agree?
We are living in an era where technologies play a crucial role in our life and computer is one of the most important invention of technology. Nowadays, it plays a vital role in our daily life, so it is believed by some people that computer skills should be added in our education along with reading, writing and maths. In my opinion, I believe that in this modern world our education system could add computer learning as a subject for students because it will help them on their daily life to make make their life more comfortable.
Firstly, computer plays a vital role in our education system. For example, in previous years, we had to solve different mathematics calculations by calculator which was time consuming. But, nowadays, we can solve different critical calculations by using computer. As a result, it saves our time. In addition to this, now scientists also can do their different critical calculations by using different softwares of computer. So, above reason we have to learn computer skills.
Secondly, another point is that computer has made our communication sector more convenient. For instance, now we can book any railway or bus tickets easily without going to railway or bus stations. It not only saves our time but also saves our money. Besides this, it also has tremendous role on our banking sector. Now we can transfer, deposit, or withdraw our money at anytime without any hassles. We can also purchase anything by using ATM card without bearing hand cash. This has been possible only because of computer based banking system.
Finally, computer has outstanding impact on our health sector. It is needed for different disease diagnosis. MRI, ultrasonography, X-ray, and other equipments are linked with computers which help to identify different diseases. For the identification of different diseases computer based skills are needed.
To sum up, computer plays important role in our education, banking system, communication and health sectors. To operate and maintain those sectors we have to learn computer skills. Therefore, we have to add computer learning as subject in our education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: make
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Message: The proper name in singular (ATM) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...can also purchase anything by using ATM card without bearing hand cash. This has bee...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'diseases'' or 'disease's'?
Suggestion: diseases'; disease's
...es. For the identification of different diseases computer based skills are needed. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82144397495 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524637681159 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4283672984 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6086956522 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143451389973 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046866777405 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593825037015 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897002643207 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508814933194 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.