The line graph illustrates the number of tourists and local people who travel in the UK and overseas respectively, during 1979 to 1999 and the bar chart describes the majority of the UK citizens who visited internationally tour in the famous countries across the years. Overall, it can depict that the portion of the UK residents had the most significant number in travelling aboard. Whereas, the lowest number had visited by UK general, people in the Turkey.
To begin with, In 1979, the figure of UK people stood with above 10 million and slightly increased in 1984 up to 20 million. Subsequently, this trend shown dramatically rose in 1999 up to more than 50 million. What is remarkable is the portion of the UK visitors had the lowest number in travelling to the Turkey in 1999 up to 2 million as compared with other UK residents during the corresponding year.
It is worth to mention that the tourists who visited the UK had gradually risen up to nearly 30 million throughout the period, while the portion of the UK citizen had visited in the France approximately up to 11 million at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...erall, it can depict that the portion of the UK residents had the most significan...
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...oughout the period, while the portion of the UK citizen had visited in the France...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79738900694 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4537854112 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22931561027 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1212130738 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669604467435 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16394579686 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683526445568 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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