Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?
It is true that the incidence of overweight children has been exacerbated over the past few decades. Two major reasons stand out as responsible for this challenge, which can be remedied by several feasible solutions.
To begin with, corpulence among youngsters can be attributed to a number of contributing factors. Firstly, it is their sedentary lifestyle that made them prone to obesity. Indeed, statistics have dedicated that the proportion of schoolchildren taking moderate to vigorous exercise frequently has declined by 30% compared to the figure in the 20th century, which leads to a significant energy accumulation as fat in their bodies and, consequently, causes obesity. Secondly, due to their hectic schedule and the ubiquity of fast food chains, children have adopted an unhealthy eating habit, in which their regular meals contain a great deal of saturate fat and sugar. Therefore, they are more likely to become obese, as proved by previous research.
However, many resolutions can be proposed to tackle the aforementioned problem. Regarding to training programs, it is favorable for schools to adopt a policy mandating learners to take up sports. Indeed, such measure is expected to incorporate regular physical activities into children’s schedule, and prevent them from obesity by fulfilling the requirement of calories consumption. Regarding to families, during their formative years, children are still dependent on parents, so fathers and mothers also have to shoulder the responsibility in the diet of their offspring. Specifically, if adults can access health awareness campaigns educating people about nutrition, they will be able to fix their children’s detrimental eating habit by various methods, such as providing them with diets high in fiber and low in fat.
Briefly, only by efforts of schools and families will childhood obesity be totally resolved.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55709342561 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03054140772 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671280276817 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6959685475 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131751713966 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495125580612 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585061853607 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857005492858 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261980619331 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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