Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?
It is true that childhood overweight is becoming a significant problem in many nations. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons for obesity in children, The first reason is due to the lack of family supervision. Parents nowadays tend to let their children freely choose what type of food they adore, such as sweets and over-processed production. Researchers have found that more than 70 per cent of their ingredient content is harmful fat and sugar, which are the main factors leading to obesity. In some Asian countries such as Vietnam, many grandparents have bought junk food from the stores in front of the school entrance. They are all foodborne that contribute to several celiac diseases or even more dangerous in future, uncontrollable weight gain. Another reason is the introduction of food without origin. Thus, to quickly get attractive to children, over-processed food is coloured in many beautiful images. This affects the preschool taste and makes them eat more, so that the saturated fat, which is known as the cause of being overweight, vastly increases over time.
One of the most effective solutions to tackle this problem would be for the government to make policies to limit the introduction of food without guaranteeing hygiene. Moreover, it is necessary for parents to educate their kids about the bad impacts of junk food, and let them take part in outdoor activities to lose calories.
For instance, lack of family supervision and the entering of over-processed food has negative effects on children's weight. Both government and families have solutions to minimize the obesity rate of children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13978494624 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84050122678 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.95726152 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213765946215 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664784196801 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714218538277 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135014504149 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999747237993 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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