Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and
commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce
these pressures?
In the global era, most of countries implement pressure system for children education. In the positive way, the pressure system has affected to excogitate children that well-discipline as well as active learning. The purpose of pressure system is in order to create the best generation in the future whose has several kind of capacity, i.e. integrity, hard-worker, as well as well-skill generation.
Although, the pressure system also has negative way whereas some students should be depressed. There are several kind of pressure systems that implemented in school, such as, doing plenty of home works, adding lesson hours, and learning sort of courses. Due to these conditions, some students feel the pressure system has took their time for playing and gaming a bunch.
Nowadays, some countries have been conducting to revise pressure system regulations which should be balancing between a number of lesson hours and playing or sporting. Indeed, finland which was acknowledged has the best education system in the world has erased all of home work and final exam. Moreover, the school should be functioned not only as learning centre, but also as the main playground for kids. Therefore, according to the data from Research centre for educational Psychology-University of Melbourne stated that student elementary schools in finland are happiest then students from countries which implanted pressure system.
Afterwards, educational system which led by finland should be a new role model for numerous states in various continents. The education system of finland not only be functioned for reducing pressure systems, but also it could be guaranteed that all of children in the school feel happy and make them incredibly comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
In the global era, most of countries implement pressure system for children ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...best generation in the future whose has several kind of capacity, i.e. integrity, hard-worke...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, as well as well-skill generation. Although, the pressure system also has n...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...students should be depressed. There are several kind of pressure systems that implemented in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...e students feel the pressure system has took their time for playing and gaming a bun...
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...time for playing and gaming a bunch. Nowadays, some countries have been condu...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to centre'
Suggestion: to centre
...ould be functioned not only as learning centre, but also as the main playground for ki...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the happiest'.
Suggestion: are the happiest
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...ies which implanted pressure system. Afterwards, educational system which led...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, kind of, of course, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4962962963 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94214911699 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6728511143 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206030052766 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935917270128 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435948587049 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141870737743 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018533840224 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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