Children nowadays watch significantly now television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. Why is this the case?
What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?
Today there is a burgeoning rate of youngsters who prefer watching television than doing leisure activities and this causes an adverse effect on the development of children. Therefore, my essay will concentrate on main reasons and solutions for this issue.
Regarding to the root of this case, there are two causes that can access children to television rather than outside activities. Firstly, it is true that television generates an undeniably immense enchantment to youngsters. Various channels there improved and updated day by day to adapt offspring’s demand such as Cartoon Network, CNN, BBC, with a wide range of children’s programs from entertaining to educational shows, are holding children’s foot in front of a television screen. Secondly, there are a large number of youngster’s playing areas visually narrowed along with the decrease in outside leisure activities. Consequently, youngsters in the modern world only stay at home after school time and spend many hours on digital technologies like television, which is considered as a drug.
However, there are also various ways to solve this problem, which the most initial importance is a hearty attention to the development of country’s offspring. Whereby, people may construct children’s amusement parks, amusement centers or organize outside games like sports and art performances in order to captivate and stimulate children. Furthermore, parents should encourage their sons and daughters to attend according activities to improve comprehensively children’s physical and intellectual capabilities. Additionally, the school schedule should combine learning with sports or exercises to promote extra activities. The slogan: “extracurricular activities imperative for overall development” maybe suitable for these efforts.
In conclusion, I emphasis two reasons holding children in front of television, which are the high quality of television programs and the decrease of children’s amusement areas. Nevertheless, a variety of methods may tackle this issue, which its core is the heart and the devotion of adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... television screen. Secondly, there are a large number of youngster's playing areas visually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93506493506 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51669391768 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5662802877 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211396174379 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731928950872 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641165306515 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136992545802 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015915219221 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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