Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
It is obvious that various cities in the world today are lacking in harbors. My essay will concentrate on analyzing the causes and solutions of this problem.
In term of causes, there are some apparent reasons for this issue. Firstly, the burgeoning increase in population (or overpopulation) is the root of a lacking of land. In detail, statistics show that there are over 7 billion people on the Earth and will climb to 9 billion in 2050. While our Earth remains its size stable, there is no land for humans to construct houses or even roofs over their heads. Secondly, overexploiting of land to build factories, shopping malls and golf courses narrows an area of houses and makes our descendants have no or very little way to construct residents. These result in the instabilities beneath a serious housing shortage that people and their offspring are gradually experiencing.
However, some solutions may be adopted to overcome this problem. The prerequisite is that governments must put the life condition of citizens on top, which means making spaces for them to stabilize their life and accordingly cut the spaces for factories or entertainment places. This will make a favorable impact to people. Furthermore, constructing residential areas or cheap apartments is also a sound method to stimulate the real-estate market and create the roof for citizens. Eventually, government should appreciate one or two children in a house to reduce the potential overpopulation. These three ways are considered by many people to be good choices to conduct.
In conclusion, a housing shortage is a serious problem which needs governments and organizations tackle together. The reasons and solutions above should be considered to solve this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02383178657 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7618263004 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207494933502 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668337233395 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496816512677 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129652277748 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227253817591 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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