Competitiveness is a skill that is required in modern society in order to succeed. How does competitiveness affect the individual? Is it positive or negative?
Competitiveness is a skill that illustrate tenacity what people want. Nowadays, strong skill of competitiveness has been settling in people. Glanced at the strong resilience of people, conclusion indicates that competitiveness influence to mankind negatively in many ways.
First of all, over tenacity leads to conflict of friends, perhaps. If you compete with your best friend, both of you will try to win despite the friendship. However, you have to comprehend that close relationship is worth more than your win. In China, for example, due to over population students tend to prefer not to build a friendship during their school life time and get over competitive to get an invitation from universities since colleges will initiate only top rated students. Furthermore, victory of competition is just a temporary thing, while, your beloved friend will stay with you for the rest of your life.
Secondly, negative impact of competitiveness is being unfold on friends and families of person. Hard working students, or workers perhaps ignore their beloved ones in order to succeed. Nonetheless, people who had not put so much effort that create concentration in sole on study or work, will have a time to observe the real life meaning and spend his/her valuable time with loved ones. For instance, Jack Ma, CEO of Alibaba company, said that students who got an average grade during school times had a time to observe other things than studying, in future they will succeed without a doubt. Moreover, the one who is special to you will may have a serious disorder, or perhaps pass away suddenly due to many factors, that is the spectacular example of not devoting more time with your beloved ones. You will end up regretting for wrong action, as a consequence.
By way of conclusion, some may argue that competitiveness is only way to survive and succeed in modern world, in my view, however, it have a cross impact in human being from many perspectives. People may lose their valuable time by chasing to successful life and ignore their family and friends, as well as over resilience create a break between best friends. Whereas, if you balance your daily working time and time that you have to spend in family, you do not have to be over competitive in order to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9554973822 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81340061008 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.158118797 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.352941176 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14720524463 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608511128342 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626711821592 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113458893311 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683439167226 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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