In this cutting edge era there is almost no field where computers are not used. Computers have eased the lives of people in countless ways. Yet, there are some areas where computers are misused and may cause harm to the public. This essay will argue that computers are the most important invention of all time.
To begin with, the most important use of computers is communication. A person sitting in a small library in Kenya can communicate with his/her friend in Tokyo through video chatting or via emails. With the advent of computers, the world seems to be a small place. Computers have a great impact in the education sector as well. Teachers and students can access research papers, informative videos and many e-books through computers, which can be downloaded on the local machines for offline use. Virtual learning is the new norm and computers have made it easier for everyone to connect and learn.
If we did not have computers, we would have neither been able to send a man on the moon nor a rover on Mars for exploration. Large mathematical equations that would take years to be solved by a small team of highly intelligent people are done within minutes on a computer. Rocket simulations, asteroid projections and satellite control have been possible only by this beautiful invention.
Nowadays, some people are trying to misuse the power of computers. There are hackers who attach a virus to some files or send phishing emails to multiple accounts. Once a user downloads these files or clicks on the website, the virus corrupts the machine and may hold important data for ransom. People, especially in the IT industry, are showing health problems due to excess use of computers. They sit in the same posture for hours, glued to their monitors which may cause eye strain, back and neck problems.
To summarize, I admit there are some problems while using computers but the pros outweigh the cons. With proper and safe computer practices, one can stay away from these disadvantages. All in all, computers are here to stay and undoubtedly an integral part of our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8985915493 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6024815344 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5881696985 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8095238095 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148541409748 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462047378429 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482239359212 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797241324583 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402026542853 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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