Nowadays, people tend to spend most of their time on work and due to this, they find pleasure in consuming fast-food as it avoids wastage of time. Fast-food outlets are on the rise in developed nations and provide access to the local people. The trend of dining at fast-food outlets is fashionable and time-saving, yet it has some downfalls.
Firstly, fast-food is unhealthy and is the cause of many heart related diseases and obesity. Doctors ask people to refrain themselves from fast-food, as it is shown to cause harm in the long run. Secondly, the businesses of many healthy, home-cooked meal providers is on the decline due to the increase in the number of fastfood outlets. Fast-food outlets have shown to attract customers with great discounted schemes.
Thirdly, we are losing out on the importance of having a balanced diet. Food eaten should have a proper balance of proteins, carbohydrates, fats and vitamins, which fast-food lacks and has abundance of fats and carbohydrates. Recent studies by the World Health Organization, show that having a balanced diet is crucial to lead a proper lifestyle.
On the contrary, there are some people who support the recent spurt in fast-food outlets. They say it contributes to the country’s economy immensely and provides employment with fixed pay. They also believe that working-class people save around 1 to 2 hours daily by consuming food at these outlets.
All in all, it is true that the advantages of fast-food outlets has made our lives very convenient. But, in my opinion, it has a negative impact on our health, body and lifestyle. Hence, the disadvantages of consuming junk food definitely outweighs the advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13405797101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91155371452 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7873883339 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377384196873 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11974664375 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837849233092 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192856337755 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708745622365 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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