Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In these days, there is a growing recognition that computer is well on its way becoming the most important inventions of humankind over the last decades. However, as for me, I side with the opinion that some other inventions other than computer are more worthy of being the most important invention.
Admittedly, although it is true that the computer's endeavor to make human's life more convenient should be recognized, especially in the field of entertainment and management, it has put our health at risk. There is mounting evidence that long immersion in technological devices such as computer would be conducive to myriads of health hazards, for example myopia and obesity. It is thus difficult to deny that the flourishing of computer may function as a facilitator of various health problems and diseases, which would more or less become a prerequisite for other issues related to finance and facilities.
We can consider other inventions apart from computer when it comes to the question which invention is the most important one. To take a brief example, inventions as simple as pen and paper should be recognized as the most important. The reasons for this is rooted in the fact that without pen and paper, humans could not store documents, explorations and knowledge of various fields. Accordingly, such knowledge are inaccessible for latter generations, and evolution would thus be impossible.
In conclusion, although computer represents many benefits, it should not be considered the most important invention. It would be more advisable for us to take into account other inventions, such as pen or paper.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, may, so, thus, well, apart from, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97662438249 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8862562533 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213939028524 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091953677782 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614832505924 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147365470312 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624524775935 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.