The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?
Along with the rapid growth of the economy, the money spent on accommodation, food and bills has increased significantly. In the scope of this essay, several detrimental effects on individuals and the whole society caused by this matter of fact are addressed and effective solutions are suggested.
From the perspective of a single person, the increasing of budget which is used to cover daily basic needs may cause anxiety and stress on middle and lower class people. This situation will trigger people to seek for second jobs in order to fulfill daily requirements and therefore lead to a decrease in the rate of pleasant among family members due to heavy workload and the lack of time to care about each other. Moreover, if the inflation get worse but one can not be able to look for another income beside the conventional one, he might get into criminal life and stuck in such issue for goods. It is understandable that the incentive to become a thief is the shortage of money for medical care for his parents or his child, which can be recognized in the case of Ho Van Luyen.
The effect of higher living cost on the society should be thoroughly considered. As mentioned above, this fact may result in an increase of criminals which will raise alarming concern about the safety level among citizens. Moreover, the number of tourists may declined dramatically and therefore, the amount of money taken from this source will decreased which leads to low taxes and thus poor public services. For instance, when a man killed his sister due to the the conflicts in inheritation in 2005 in Binh Duong, despite the scenery beauty, the number of visitors to this place went down gradually causing the loss of nearly 5 millions USD on tourism.
Nevertheless, there are some measures that can be applied to mitigate the aforementioned issue. Firstly, as a customer, one must understand which goods can bring realistic valuation to them and which one only can only be used as decoration. For example, when it comes to choosing a cook, a housewife has to consider two main factors: the durability and the efficiency instead of its beautiful color. By doing this, we can save more money for medical care and entertainments thus reduce the stress levels. Secondly, as a businessman, one should apply experts to improve his technologies in order to lower the cost on manpower and energy consumption. In this sense, not only the business itself gain certain benefit, the product’s price also drops considerably.
In conclusion, higher living cost will do harm to individuals and the society as the whole. However, there are many proper remedies that can be applied to solve this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
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Line 9, column 462, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ce, when a man killed his sister due to the the conflicts in inheritation in 2005 in Bi...
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Line 9, column 462, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ce, when a man killed his sister due to the the conflicts in inheritation in 2005 in Bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96916299559 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76069580438 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579295154185 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6926934464 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198305733848 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671867509418 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770609763422 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132254272181 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735120572651 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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