Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
My friends who are studying in European like Germany and United Kingdom would enjoy hot pots in some Chinese traditional festivals like Spring Festival. This is because traditional food could be purchased everywhere with the rapid globalization, and thereby various countries share more similarities. However, whether it is a positive or negative tendency in modern world? From my point of view, the drawbacks of this development outweigh its strong points, and let me illustrate my perspective as follows.
To begin with, there is no doubt that people, working or studying in another country will benefit from these similarities. In other words, international employees or students are likely to confront many barriers when living in other areas. For example, their intake habits and activities in certain occasions are totally different compared with local residents, and they might feel more satisfied and pleasant if they could find something from their hometown. Briefly, this global trend could bring the sense of fulfillment and satisfaction to those international students or employees.
Nevertheless, local culture contexts might be damaged if one country absorbed too much from other countries. What I’m trying to say is that tradition culture might be undermined if local people are more obsessed with those exotic things. Young fellows in China, taken into consideration, are prone to celebrate Western festivals like Christmas rather than our own traditional festivals, and some original activities are forgotten. To sum up, this development between countries could be detrimental when it comes to countries’ own typical culture heritages.
For another angle, what’s the meaning of studying aboard if there is merely any distinction among various countries. In other words, some students want to apply for courses in another country partly because they crave to experience another lifestyle which is greatly different from their own. Therefore, this intention could be frustrated through less distinctions between their hometown and the country that they are living in.
In conclusion, as to the situation that countries are becoming more and more similar, I think it has both merit and demerit. Additionally, whether it is good or not largely depends on people’s attitudes towards it, as an old saying goes ‘everything is double-edged’.
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briefly, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62880886427 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06154466933 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606648199446 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7745787216 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.529411765 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192121961842 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655954155697 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779424358365 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108900583278 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535095525981 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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