Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Governments often face a dilemma: how to distribute limited resources so as to develop various aspects of their country. Nowadays, it is not uncommon to see many administrations take economic growth as their priority regardless of other categories of progress. From my point of view, it is somewhat reasonable for a couple of governments to consider economic progress as their most essential goal, yet other development, like educational level of citizens and environmental protection, should also be considered.
To begin with economic progress, there is no doubt that emphasizing the significance of it would be the most efficient approach to reinforcing one country. What I'm trying to say is that economy is the foundation of domestic development, without which, other growth is more likely to encounter a stumbling block. For example, our country, China, ignored the essence of economic development in 1970s, and it had almost taken 3 decades for its economy to recover. Briefly, there is nothing wrong about focusing on the development of economy.
Nevertheless, there are many other aspects when it comes to the constructional decisions made by governments, and some of them might also contribute to the economic progress, and vise versa. Take education as an example. Throughout the enhancement of people's educational level, some citizens might be able to exploit sophisticated science and technology to make some achievements. Additionally, certain inventions might not only improve people's welfare, but also help to save the expenditure of developing projects. In short, developing education seems to be a feasible investment for administrations.
For another angle, environmental protection is an indispensable part as to the goals of various governments. By no means could governments underestimate the significance on protecting the environment. To be specific, when facilitating the economic progress, administrations should also make sure that economy is not at the cost of our environment in order to establish the sustainable development.
All in all, it would be better for governments to guarantee that pay attention on various ingredients of progress including not only economy but also domestic educational levels and environmental protection. There is also an old saying in China 'Progress should be based on every aspect'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, nevertheless, so, as to, for example, in short, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5782122905 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38130654947 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3107169833 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.470588235 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214280760129 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677176747458 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555618382693 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127041072694 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614598165737 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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