in countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is without doubt true that the rate of unemployment is at the peak in many nations. I partially agree that such problems are arises due to the obligation of education up to primary school. However, there are some other reasons behind unemployment.
To begin with, a numerous people are suffering to not getting jobs in their lives either they are literate or illiterate. The primary reason is that the growth of population is at alarming rate due to which there is stiff competition in all to settle in their lives. In India, for example, if anybody want to get job have to clear series of competitive exams, only after that they would be selected on the position. Furthermore, the government have to initiate some other projects also such as road construction etcetera and hence authority have not sufficient budget to give employees.
On the other hand, the mankind have to fulfill basic requirement to get job. Undoubtedly, it is rightly said that if the person passed only primary education would not be able to do work. Because he do not know about discipline and other responsibilities at workplace and may prove himself risky for the employer. To illustrate, in my city Amritsar, one child who was below 10 year to get job in an industry and loss his life by electric shock. Consequently, the authority is not allowed to do work who did not complete their high education.
To conclude, my personal perspective is that the rate of unemployment is controlled only if the public would be educated and the competitive exams would be limited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85338345865 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85832237228 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4000511359 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17251139822 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593826034365 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754638063782 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11341467721 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506574513441 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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