in countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
As the technology develops, many new obs are being created. Yet unemployment is regarded as the big problem particularly in developing countries. The point of controversy is that education should be obligatory up to primary level and not to secondary level in countries where people face the lack of employment.
this essay will discuss about the reasons and also argue that education must be provided till secondary level.
Firstly, the success of the country is based on the citizens of that country, which are interlinked to the education. Because if a person is properly educated he or she will understand the countries policies and will behave well. In addition to this children are only equipped with basic knowledge in the primary schools and for the depth of the practical knowledge they must definitely go for their higher studies. However, people with the minimal knowledge may get only the lower grade pays.
Secondly, the countries economy can be raised high with the literacy rate and also employment can be increased. For instance over the years, the Indian unemployment problem has reduced due to the fact that the literacy rate has sharply risen to 70%. So, most of the people don't face much problems in getting employed. Generally, students in secondary schools will also have plethora of options in choosing there careers and will also get high pays.
In a nutshell, I conclude that education is the key factor for the development of the economy. Hence, this must be treated with high importance. Thus, measures need to be taken by the government officials that people in their nation get educated properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10780669145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68256250029 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3523497636 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262908720947 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745201443504 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064285175027 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138066631214 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056343341552 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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