Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, urbanization is on a high scale and importance is given in developing the cities.However, a point of controversy occurs here where some people think money should be indulged in hospitals and schools while others think to enlarge the city with great buildings. this essay discuss about the different views and also feel that although cities need to more modernized, concentration should be given to schools and hospitals.
Firstly with the growing technlogical trends the mindset of people is being changed and most people tend to live in big buildings and luxurious apartments. They also want that the government funds should be utilized in developing the buildings and constructing new flats. In general their idealogy is if the ity gets developed automatially the country gets developed which in turn will create lot of placment opportunities.
though urbanization is occuring there are still some parts where people don't get proper education and medical facilities. For instance, my neighbour went to her native where she had met with an accident and there was a small hospital near by, but the facilities at that hospital were so poor that she could not get proper treatment. although she was out of danger this should be considered as one of the most serious issues. And there is other scenario where a girl is having a great zeal to pursue her eduaction but she couldn't because of her family issues. so, in this case the money can be utilized in providing scholar ships to such students.
I feel that government and the individuals themselves should concetrate on enlarging the schools and hospitals.However developing the cities is a great idea but more concentration should be put on the education and health side so that every person receive good and quality health and studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09698996656 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88149169245 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3673722485 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181485890528 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671361182824 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465121928629 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109017836714 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530097274855 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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