Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over the years, sports have gained so much popularity and people tend to show more interest in watching the international sport events. Famous events in games like football, baseball and other sporting occasions are necessary in soothing the tensions and enhancing patriotic emotions in a positive way. this essay will describe the scenario and will argue that some times these sports may evolve in a bad manner.
To my mind, in this era of modern technology and trends a lot of popularity has been gained towards sports and other activities especially there is a huge fame for sports like football, baseball and other international sport events. the advantages of playing games with different countries is that there will be communication established between the people of both the countries and also try to be friendly with them provided if these games are considered in a positive and sportive manner.
like the coin has two sides, there are other cons regarding to this scene. some people many not consider these sports in a good manner rather they indulge the feelings of negativity and the patriotic feelings in a bad sense. Few instances are provided on this. For example if the sports are conduced between India and Pakistan, the mankind of either nations become so personal and will try to portray their feelings of patriotism by criticising the other nation. this is treated as a serious issue as here in this case the ethics of the sports are disrespected. Hence, the people of the country should adapt to the behaviour of being in peace and just consider them as games and do not take them too personalor to heart.
In a nutshell, I feel that though the sport activities inculcate the feelings of patriotism yet on the other hand there are negative effects where all the people may not treat them equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, regarding, so, for example, i feel, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93203883495 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60574276778 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517799352751 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0659931041 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233697742356 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901981408709 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672712921673 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147276221119 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643539619955 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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