Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international communities take to make make sure the supply of food is enough?
Food is the most significant source of energy without it survival is not possible.Due to the ever-expanding population, demand of food is increasing exponentially.farmers face many problems for transporting food to public.In this essay I will discuss the main causes and potential solutions to them in posterior paragraphs.
To begin with, it is undeniable fact that population creates trouble for farmers.In other words, when there is an increase in the population of a country, it leads to more consumption, in turn, high demand.Therefore, it imbalances the chain of demand and supply of food.farmers face several difficulties in providing food to all the customers as there are less farmers.People generally does not want to do farming because it is not as profitable as other fields.In addiction to it, it become difficult to fulfill the need of the consumers.For an instance, when population increases then there is a need of more food supply and due to low number of farmers, it becomes hard to supply food to individuals.
Furthermore, there are some possible solutions regarding this notion like advanced planning and modern methods of farming.Government need to check the balance between demand and supply in advance so that they can detect the problem before it arises.Moreover, organic farming is also beneficial as it helps in growing crops at faster rate.Thus, the need of population can be fulfilled by adopting this method of farming.For an instance, in developed countries, particularly in europe, organic farming is prefered by farmers as it is healthy and more profitable.
Hammering the last nail, although there are numerous difficulties in meeting the demand of food, it can be achieved through the future forecasting techiques.Therefore, government should support the modern methods of farming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4823943662 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50622904764 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.267667603 49.4020404114 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.25 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231563070397 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138192882752 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511640734147 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138192882752 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511640734147 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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