Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international communities take to make make sure the supply of food is enough?
It is undeniable fact that burgeoning need for food has become a major crisis in the entire world, which may bring worst consequences for the human being. This eassy intends to know what are reasons behind it and what should be done to crub this menace as well as my personal opinion this matter.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove why demanding of food is increasing relentless in the world. The mammoth recognisable fact is that due to the rising population which has major impact on it. More masses mean more need of food. To illustrate, as per a recent survey global population is being inclined than ever before. The another factor is linked to the escalating income of people in the development countries, which may cause dietary changes ranging from eating more protein and meat. Such factors which more likely to prove worst as regards to demand for food.
However, in order to mitigate such obstacles, international communities such as government and business play a vital role in it. These communities need to work together so that such situations could be confined by some effective efforts. Firstly, some essential implements should be provided to farmers by government then they could be able to produce more food with the help of new technology. Moreover, since wastage of food is increasing, it should be banned by state administration. This can be done by information compaigns in order to make people aware pertaining to food wastage. Thus, with the help of technology, it could be ensure.
To sum up, without food, people are not able to survive in the world. Albeit food demand has inclined in the present time, it should be confined through some imperative methods
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the worst'.
Suggestion: bring the worst
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as regards, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67633339042 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2092443307 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240460854242 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738457499042 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580632293944 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139229541837 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305161186789 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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