Describe some aspects of globalisation that impact on your own life.
Globalization is a term commonly used in modern times. It is possible to understand globalization as a global village in which all characteristics of social life are interwoven into a unified world on a global scale. From my point of view, globalization has a positive and negative effect in some respects, including mass media, employment and the growth of world music.
The first facet that changes dramatically under the rapid growth of globalization is the mass media. In the 1990s, the media were backward and less popular. Nowadays, the great advancement of information technology and communications equipment, connecting people around the world is more convenient. In particular, telegraph was a general means of transmitting news in the nineteenth century. At present, one of the most popular means of media is the internet.
In contrast to the optimistic features of communication, employment is a significant pessimistic issue of globalization. Definitely, multinational corporations are always preferred in all sides than internal companies. Moreover, the fierce competition has caused many businesses to bankrupt and close down. As a result, workers are unemployed and become cheap labor for foreign companies. Furthermore, local products are gradually replaced by international products – which undesirably impact the domestic economy.
In addition to aspects of the mass media and employment, the growth of world music has severely modified young people today. The first influences of world music on youthful generation in Vietnam is the trend of music from developed countries: USA, Korea, etc. For example, positive factors of the tendency of progressive music in the USA gain the atmosphere, the music rhythm of globalization. Some music of Korean singers along with fashion style made the young copy, cover versions. Vietnamese youth repeated the copy, this way expressed through the propensity.
In conclusion, globalization is a powerful process that has affected many phases ranging from mass media, employment and the world music. Although globalization may also have disadvantages, it plays a major role in pushing economic and employment developments forward in developing countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65868263473 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2775010267 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5700782928 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472886582316 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120051398953 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209303345952 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0224477003615 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198789609436 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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